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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
 fear that
technology
 is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A part of society nowadays is scared that we are under
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 of
technology
, while the rest believe it has given us many beneficial developments. Without a doubt,
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scientists are inventing a great number of smartwatches, robots, computers and many other devices that make our everydayness so much easier. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both these notions and give my own one.
Firstly
, the industries and factories are using more and more electronic tools and robots that make the process more efficient and quicker
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 to a real human.
Consequently
,
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society worries that
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robots will take over the
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workplaces
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work places
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 available for
people
. Another example of
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 aspect of
technology
 is tracking our mobile phones. Often many apps ask us to give consent to use our location which
then
 shows us advertisements linked to the area we live.
As a result
, many
people
 are frightened that our life is being controlled.
On the other hand
, there are so many devices and apps that help to manage
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time wisely and are extremely convenient. A great example of
that is
 managing when the lights are turning on or off in a house using a remote. There is no need to get up, we can just press the button and it is done for us.
In addition
, the ability to order food and other goods online can save up so much time and makes our lives easier. All in all,
people
 argue if
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 of
technology
 has positive or negative effects on
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society nowadays. In my opinion, if it is used in a good way, the devices can be beneficial and help us to relax as well as have more free time.
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