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In some areas of the US, a «curfew» is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

#areas #«curfew» #teenagers #doors #time #night #adult
The chart illustrates how a bee grows from being
eggs
 to adulthood. Overall, for the insect to be fully matured, it goes through 5 different stages which complete its life cycle.
First
, the life of a bee begins with 1 or 2
eggs
 which are laid by the female every three
days
.
Secondly
, the
eggs
 are hatched between 9 and 10
days
. At 5
days
, the young bee comes out of the egg and starts growing.
Furthermore
, between 7 and 9
days
, they start learning how to fly, and at
this
 time they grow 3 times than before.
Finally
, they become young adults with big
stripped
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 backs and get ready to lay
eggs
 and continue the cycle. It should be noted that the life cycle of
this
 insect is short, it is between 34 and 36
days
. When they are mature, they are about 5 times huge compared to the
first
 5
days
 after hatching.

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