Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is true that the it is consequences
government
spend a lot of financial resources to
medical Change preposition
on
research
instead
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of environment
environment
Replace the word
environmental
research
. However
, I am of the opinion that environment
research
should been
paid more than medical Change the verb form
be
research
and I try to explain my opinion in my essay.
Firstly
, both of the researches depend on each other and if the plant in over environment
die
, Change the verb form
dies
then
there will not creep from medical research
because the most of medicine
Add a missing verb
is prepare
prepare
from plants. Change the form of the verb
prepared
Secondly
Add a comma
,
,
if we harm the Remove the comma
apply
environment
consequence will be very bad because chain
of life Add an article
the chain
a chain
in
our Change preposition
on
planet
depends on state
of Add an article
the state
environment
and if the Add an article
the environment
environment
will be harmed all alive creatures will die. Thirdly
, if the environment
will be harmed or destroyed in
our Change preposition
on
planet
cataclysms will begin for instance
earthquakes, sun
will Add an article
the sun
burns
our Change the verb form
burn
planet
, extinction of life in
our Change preposition
on
planet
. We also
should protect our environment
by planting trees, throwing trash in the trash cans and doing everything in our power.
However
, for
Change preposition
apply
environment
Replace the word
environmental
researches
should more allocate funds but Correct your spelling
researchers
government
should donate for medical Add an article
the government
researches
because in 21 century we have a lot of diseases and for Fix the agreement mistake
research
healing
Add a comma
,healing
this
diseases Correct determiner usage
these
government
should spend money for the development of medicine
for example
if medicine
does not develop, humanity will have big problems in the face of cancer, HIV infection, diabetes mellitus and especially COVID-19. To avoid these problems the government
should develop medicine
.
To conclude, I would stay
that the Correct your spelling
say
government
should donate more to environment
Replace the word
environmental
research
than medical research
but government
should not forget about medical development.Add an article
the government
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