Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that the
government
spend a lot of financial resources
to
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medical
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instead
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of environment
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environment
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environmental
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research
.
However
, I am of the opinion that
environment
research
should
been
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paid more than medical
research
and I try to explain my opinion in my essay.
Firstly
, both of the researches depend on each other and if the plant in over
environment
die
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,
then
there will not creep from medical
research
because the most of
medicine
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prepare
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from plants.
Secondly
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it is consequences
,
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if we harm the
environment
consequence will be very bad because
chain
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the chain
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of life
in
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our
planet
depends on
state
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the state
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of
environment
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and if the
environment
will be harmed all alive creatures will die.
Thirdly
, if the
environment
will be harmed or destroyed
in
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our
planet
cataclysms will begin
for instance
earthquakes,
sun
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the sun
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will
burns
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our
planet
, extinction of life
in
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our
planet
. We
also
should protect our
environment
by planting trees, throwing trash in the trash cans and doing everything in our power.
However
,
for
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environment
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environmental
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researches
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researchers
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should more allocate funds but
government
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the government
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should donate for medical
researches
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because in 21 century we have a lot of diseases and for
healing
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,healing
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this
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these
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diseases
government
should spend money for the development of
medicine
for example
if
medicine
does not develop, humanity will have big problems in the face of cancer, HIV infection, diabetes mellitus and especially COVID-19. To avoid these problems the
government
should develop
medicine
. To conclude, I would
stay
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that the
government
should donate more to
environment
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environmental
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research
than medical
research
but
government
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the government
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should not forget about medical development.
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