Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Past revolves around both good and bad things.
Thus
, having
people
with both views is not strange at all.
Hence
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why some
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people
think that the past has nothing to offer us but
also
why
majority
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of the
people
think the opposite.
Firstly
, let's talk about the bad things,
in other words
, big mistakes that happened in the past.
For example
, wars,
discrimiantion
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discrimination
over skin
colors
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which fears
people
that the past might repeat
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again
if
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next
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generation happens to know about it and do the exact same thing. Those who think that way aren't wrong either. They have the living proof; Nuclear. Despite
of
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people
in Japan still hurting for what happened during World War two, countries still trying day and night to own nuclear.
Therefore
,
people
believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today. So,
people
who believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand
human's
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life are wrong ? Well, it is
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apparently
not. As I've mentioned earlier that the past consist of both pros and cons, the majority of
the
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people
believe that
people
learn from mistakes. They believe that past
it
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the book that
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to be studied to write
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better future with
less
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flaws.
For example
, by restoring
the
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peace, humanity was
safed
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saved
or by standing up for equality, humans
stays
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in peace. Some may ask
then
is
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producing Nuclear has to do anything with peace. The answer is yes.
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In fact
, it is one of the main reasons why there is no war. In
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simplest explanation, it is used to threaten those countries who wanna start a war. In my opinion, if there is no mistake, there is no growth. History being a book full of precious information that could
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humanity in the future , we have to study it even if it
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time and effort.
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