some people say History is one of most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world,subject like science and technology are more important than History

It is often argued that in school history classes are one of the most crucial classes, while others assert that technology and science are the far most important topics to discuss. In my view, it is a subjective decision
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is based on
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career choice. Many research suggests that studying history is important for those individuals who work in a profession where previous knowledge is required. Professions like archaeology and weather forecasting
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that one who is studying it should know the previous facts and data.
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the cause that killed the entire
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population, by finding
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to survive
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similar phenomenon if happened in future.
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, certain people support the point that technical topics are more valuable. The reason is they see them as
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to get a good job. It is clearly evident that in
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era majority of the things are operated by technology and due to
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reason there are plenty of new jobs are opening that demands the knowledge of science and technology.
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, on Linkedin (a job seeking platform) there are 50,000 jobs in Texas, USA that asks only for graduates holding a degree in
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field. In conclusion, history can
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be a valuable field for students who are eager to make a career where the knowledge of old data is required,
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the new job openings illustrate the importance of studying science. In my opinion, it is clearly an individual’s choice to choose which suits him the best.
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