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Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence that any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?

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In our modern
society
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 youngsters are wielding power and impact
over all
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 other previous young
generation
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 my view,
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 trend is the result of freedom of choice given to them from their earlier ages, and several extra courses
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 being taken by them.
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 generation is being allowed to make independent choices about what they wear, eat, do and so forth. Doing it consistently exercises their ability to take proper paths, gaining even more experiences. They, based on their past experiences, rather than react proactively cope with various circumstances.
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, as far as parents today are being obsessed with the education of their children, and
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 popularity of
tutorialships
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tutorial ships
 is being way more available than it used to be, many are attending tutorials.
People
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 are getting to know many things from their childhood.
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 trend is likely to both impair and build a relationship between elderly and young
people
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, younger
people
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 is quite different to that of older
people
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. If the former ones try to strengthen their bonds with the latter by playing
videogames
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 they can end up with unsuccessful endeavours. As what is important to young generations may be trivial for older ones,
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 activities for them are a minutia.
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, they can bond with each other by sharing what they are aware of. Youngsters,
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, can give instructions on using a particular device, and get even closer. By way of conclusion, different interpretations are likely to impede relationships of old and young
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, whilst having something to offer,
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 as intelligence, can serve as a stimulus for strong bonds between them.
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