Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on.what is influenced this? Is it a positive or a negative development.

The graph illustrates the
population
between 1960 to 2040 in a country. The age axis is shown into three different ages, and the
population
axis is separated by
percentage
. Overall, the graph forecasts people aged 65+ will dramatically increase until 2040 while 0-14 decreases and 15-64 will slightly reduce over the period, which means the
population
is getting older in 2040. In 1960 people aged 15-64 were the primary
population
, but over time (until 2040),
this
group
declined,
although
the 65+
group
, which had a low
percentage
in 1960, is going to have more
percentage
in 2040; on the other side, the
population
of 0-14 is dropping over time. From the graph, in 1990, two groups 0-14 and 65+ had the same
percentage
;
however
,
this
situation is not stable, and in 2040, the 65+
group
will have far from different (have more share) to 0-14
group
, which forecast the elder will be primary
population
in 2040.
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  • Globalization
  • Social Media
  • Celebrities
  • Influencers
  • Peer Pressure
  • Social Acceptance
  • Disposable Income
  • Self-esteem
  • Confidence
  • Marketing Campaigns
  • Consumer Behavior
  • Fast Fashion
  • Sustainable Fashion
  • Self-expression
  • Cultural Identity
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