Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical serious in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

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In recent years, there has been a drastic rise in the
pollution
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of the atmosphere,
water
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and land leading to an
overall
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impact on our planet that might take millions of years to restore.
This
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essay will present the main causes and a few solutions to overcome
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challenge on an individual and global level. To commence
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, one of the major causes that
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towards our
air
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,
water
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and soil contamination is the waste disposal of manufacturing factories
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the harmful gases emitted from them. These gases pollute the
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leading to
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pollution
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.
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, the harmful chemical waste disposed of these
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into the
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bodies contaminating the
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utilized by both humans and animals.
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, improper dumping of garbage in random places
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of landfills and recycling centres
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to polluting the ocean, rivers and agricultural lands.
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, there are a few solutions to tackle these concerns.
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, proper dumping of trash and garbage into the landfills and processing centres prevents them from entering the run-off
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and impacts the soil fertility, resulting in erosion.
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practice
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helps in the prevention of contamination of our
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cycle.
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, we can opt for public transport to mitigate the
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of our
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. In terms of global efforts, the
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governments
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of various countries should replace unsustainable resources like fossil fuels and replace them with renewable sources of energy,
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as solar, wind and hydroelectricity to reduce the pollutants in the
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caused
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these emissions.
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, they should impose certain strict laws to encourage reprocessing in our society. In conclusion, the main causes for all
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three kinds of
pollution
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appear to be the result of our negligence,
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, it is vital for us to put
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efforts to sustain our planet and safeguard it by taking measures, including opting for public transport and following reprocessing methods diligently
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the global measures like introducing laws and encouraging sustainable sources of energy.
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