The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many families during the summer

travel

to

different

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part

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parts

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of the world. There are

people

who tend to

plan

for their

vacation

, while others

not

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do not

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. I strongly believe having a vision about where I want to

travel

, which airline to

travel

with, and what is the best time to

travel

to

this

country are extremely helpful. There is a

group

which I call

them

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the

adventureous

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adventurous

archtype

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archetype

, and

this

group

tends to not

plan

for their

holiday

.

People

that prefer

this

sort of

holiday

are driven by adrenaline. They believe that the main reason for having a

vacation

is to get out of our comfort zone and

this

would happen by putting ourselves in a new environment.

For example

, nowadays, it is popular for

people

to have a back-packing trip.

However

, adults who do not

plan

in advance might be spending more than someone booked their tickets, hotels, and cars months before the

holiday

.

Also

,

usually

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the

filght

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flight

ticket

at

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in

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summer is

expensive

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more expensive

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than the tickets purchased

at

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in

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spring. The

second

group

is the planner

archtype

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archetype

, and

this

group

prefers to do their research.

This

group

has the notion that by

plan

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planning

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a

vacation

in advance someone could have better deals, tickets price, and

cars

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car

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rental.

Furthermore

, when someone gets a good

baragin

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bargain

this

means that

this

person has saved more money, and

this

means

also

that

this

person might be reallocated in upgrading hotel room, extending the

holiday

without paying a dime, and having more experience.

On the other hand

, many

people

believe that planning everything in advance might affect the

the

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vacation

’s spirit.

For instance

, some teenagers do not prefer family holidays, and

this

is because it is less adventure. In conclusion, individuals have different

preference

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when it comes to planning a trip. I completely advocate that

people

should be planned their

vacation

months before, and

this

is because it is economically better.