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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Around the globe, people are becoming self-centred rather than they should focus on their
communities
 which is causing issues not only to the individual ,
also
 to the
community
 too. In
this
 essay , there would have comments related to the concerns and the possible ways to resolve them. It is vivid that there is a number of societies throughout the world
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 distinct religions, caste and different rituals. Generally, people like to favour the members belonging to their
community
.
However
, in some areas masses do not show favour and give importance to their
community
.
This
 kind of behaviour has a direct effect on both. Specifically, minority
communities
 are facing a lack of unity and not becoming able to raise their voice for their rights .Apart from
this
 , they face problems following their religion and rituals as the
community
 of the majority dominate them just because of their limited strength.
Therefore
, it
further
 becomes the cause of the extinction of society. To sort it out, there are certain solutions that can be taken into account. Primarily,
communities
 should
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 members of their past heritage and should fill their hearts with feelings of sacrifice for their
community
.
Additionally
, they have to launch societies at lower levels to serve their members in every aspect of life .
Furthermore
, at a large ,scale they have leaders from lower groups to raise their voice to the upper levels about their concerns. So that, they all can feel safe, secure and belongingness and uplift their
community
 in the row of the
communities
 in the majority. In conclusion, people of every group should be concerned about their responsibilities toward the
community
 which would
further
 assist individuals and the whole society to live respectfully in the dominating world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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