In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, in lots of

countries

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people

could face

with

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a serious dilemma regarding the

level

of their

salaries

. Some of them think that

this

could have

positive

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effect on the country's economical situation, others may suggest that governments should not let

salaries

reaching

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above a

limit

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amount of

money

. In

this

essay, I have to propose arguments on both sides as well as

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my own opinion. On one hand, we can experience that the more

salaries

people

receive the more they consume.

This

statement is

also

one of the main principles of microeconomics. As a matter of fact, experiencing a

level

of increase in

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consumption will have a positive impact on the GDP. In the meantime, extremely high

salaries

also

contributes

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to the well-being of that

particural

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particular

group of

people

. As they have

lot

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of

money

to burn, they could donate some parts of that amount to non-governmental organisations.

Also

, using that

money

to organise charity events for kids with serious diseases. Continuing

this

way of thinking,

this

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could be the solution to eliminate poverty in an efficient way.

On the other hand

, some

people

think that extreme

salaries

above average, have to be regulated. Right here, I think that governments should introduce new tax policies which state that above a certain

level

of salary, wealthy

people

should pay extra charges. Of course, while many average

people

share

this

view, the rich

one's

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would see

this

from the opposite perspective. Personally, I

am agree

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with the view that governments should not allow

salaries

above a certain

level

. The question arises why. Well, I think that most

of

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the

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rich

people

do not use their

money

wisely. They just do not pay attention to the "others" , but to themselves.

Moreover

, from a different point of view,

this

will lead us to serious inequalities among the poor and the rich.

That is

why

,

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I support those who

wants

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a more regulated wage system.