More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

A plethora of people and businesses
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
are communicating both socially and professionally using gadgets and technology rather than
face
to
face
. From my point of
view
Add a comma
,view
show examples
there are more benefits rather than drawbacks. In
this
essay, I will explore
cons
Correct article usage
the cons
show examples
and pros of undertaking
this
route and would like to
further
explain my stand. To commence with, there are many advantages.
Firstly
, I reckon the main benefit is saving
time
. Because when people want to attend a
face
to
face
meeting, at least one of them have to commute to the meeting's place. But, if individuals attend it by using gadgets, they can save
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
traffic
time
.
As a result
, they can do many other tasks like a mom can spend more
time
with her children.
Secondly
, nowadays, there has been a pandemic due to Coronavirus. So humans are not capable to be in peoples' companies. Since it is a dangerous disease.
However
, we can arrange our stuff from home by using the internet and technology and be safe at a
time
.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages. While people are communicating online, they have
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
show examples
chances to know and get along with each other and make friendships.
For instance
, a study conducted by researchers illustrates that during the
last
decade, offsprings who owns their personal mobiles have less interest to go on a trip with their families.
In other words
, individuals are getting away from each other.
Furthermore
, sometimes these electronic devices don't work appropriately. There are
also
some restrictions on using the internet in some countries.
For example
, in China, residents haven't access to Instagram and Youtube. To sum up,
everything
Change preposition
in everything
show examples
that has been stated so far, there are negative and positive aspects. It can be good to balance our relations. Maybe we can attend our meetings online and visit our friends
face
to
face
.
Submitted by aylarsheikholeslami on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Efficiency
  • Convenience
  • Instant messaging
  • Video calls
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Economical
  • Accessibility
  • Physical barriers
  • Nuanced understanding
  • Impersonal
  • Misunderstandings
  • Reliance
  • Technical failures
  • Vulnerable
  • Security breaches
  • Hacking
  • Data theft
  • Sensitive information
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interactions
What to do next:
Look at other essays: