Recently,many workplaces have had an open-space design rather than the traditional smaller rooms for      
work
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  development has some cons,the benefits are tremendous ,especially in terms of social and   Linking Words
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To begin
  with,Some people consider working in an open space a distraction.  Linking Words
Employees
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employees
  in a common room tend to engage in more verbal communication which could result in some minutes lost for   Use synonyms
work
  .Recent research has in fact shown that communication around the office, though beneficial in other ways, does lead to declines in total   Use synonyms
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On the other hand
  , increased communication is a boon both socially and creatively. A standout example of   Linking Words
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  would be the offices designed by Apple founder Steve Jobs for both Pixar and Apple. He intentionally created offices that directed individuals to meet in common areas and that would facilitate interactions between different divisions in the company. The impact of   Linking Words
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  on morale is massive as individuals can make friends and enjoy each other’s company throughout the workday.   Linking Words
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  , the true intention of   Linking Words
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  design was to facilitate creativity. By meeting others on a regular basis,   Linking Words
employees
  are more likely to combine diverse perspectives and be more imaginative in their   Use synonyms
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  there may be minor tradeoffs in terms of productivity,   Linking Words
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  is a progressive change as it allows   Linking Words
employees
  to converse and be more creative.   Use synonyms
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  offices should become the rule, rather than the exception.Linking Words