Some people say the government should give the health care the first priority, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers’ money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays,society suffering from many diseases due to various bacteria.In fact,many people believe that public
authorities
should give preference to the medical care system. While others opinion that there are several major priorities to improve the facilities for the taxpayer's money.In my point of view,I can support spending funds to improve the well-being of care facilities.
To embark with,medical care is an inevitable option for the governments to support individuals' strength.In modern society,local Use synonyms
authorities
are encouraging industries to develop cities and jobs without safety measures.Use synonyms
As a result
, communities are suffering from many diseases due to wastage of water mixing in drinking water rivers.Linking Words
Consequently
, new viruses,Linking Words
thus
,under the poverty line people cannot afford medical expenses to recover from well-being problems.Linking Words
For example
, in 2019 worldwide 10 million population died from poor medical research equipment.Linking Words
Additionally
,every year 20% of the population dies from malaria due to their financial income they are unable to buy medicine.Linking Words
Therefore
,local Linking Words
authorities
should spend funds on the hospitals to provide the services free of cost.
On the other side,public Use synonyms
authorities
have a responsibility to develop other services like education and transport services.Nations' development starts with better roads and a proper educational system.Use synonyms
Moreover
,today private schools collect an overburdened fee from the parents if government spend money on government schools to provide free education.Linking Words
Consequently
, the literacy rate might increase in rural areas.Linking Words
Secondly
,commute facilities are Linking Words
also
required to improve because people travel daily for office purposes and business needs.Linking Words
Thus
, the poor transport system may cause higher expenses for their monthly budget, which may lead them to push into under poverty line.
In conclusion, the government should consider equal importance to all sectors for a better life for residents.Linking Words
However
,health is always a top priority to develop and provide good service to the public.Linking Words
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