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You have received a letter from your local library about a new history course they are planning to run soon. Write a letter to the center. In your letter • Find out more about the course • Ask about the requirements for the course • Ask about the course fees

#library #history #course #center #requirements #fees
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with a new
history
course
 which will be held at White Library. Having received the letter from the library, I realized
this
 program. Owing to my passion
to
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history
, I am willing to have access to more information about
this
 program. It is important for me to know about the duration, the date of
begging
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 and ending, the study plan, and the tutor who will teach.
Furthermore
, I am a first-year student of physics.
However
, I am keen on stories about
history
 and different kings and queens
at
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 the ages. I just have read some general books about past ages, and I want to know if the
addition
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requirement
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 for the
course
.
Last
 but not
the
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least, one of the most critical questions is the cost of
this
course
.
According to
 my knowledge, it is the first
history
course
 in
this
 region and you would recruit some eminent and prominent tutors.
In addition
, some fabulous educational methods will be used. Because of these features, I am willing to Know more about the fees of the
course
. I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully. Ma Kar
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general
Ensure consistency in your writing style by choosing either UK or US English spelling and usage throughout your letter.
general
Check for minor grammatical errors to improve clarity and readability.
task achievement
Consider using a wider range of vocabulary and sentence structures to enhance the sophistication of your writing.
task achievement
Your letter clearly addresses all the points asked in the prompt and provides a complete response.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable and polite, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is overall clear, making your letter easy to follow for the reader.
coherence cohesion
You have clearly separated different ideas into paragraphs, which helps in understanding your points.
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