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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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Several
people
 admire to try innovations as to be in new lands and taste different food from other
places
 while some
people
 are selecting to carry on regular
things
 that they well know. In my opinion, the statement has advantages and disadvantages which will discuss below. Let's start with the advantages of trips to new locations and trying new types of foods. As we know, most of us try to make true our dreams about
traveling
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 around the world to acquaint with new
people
 and taste anything that they have never eaten anywhere. So by visiting unknown spaces they can get relaxation and learn aborigine's traditions. And some
people
 travel to new
places
 to discover new tastes that they never see them. In my view, being in other
places
, everyone can get an opportunity to get know about new nations and exchange their experiences about
things
 and something about foods, especially dishes receipts from other
people
. It needs to be said about the negative sides of it. Most
people
 prefer to stay at home
instead
 of trying new
things
 like travelling and getting to know new tastes.
However
, these actions of
people
 have their reasons. The
first
 of them is that some
people
 do not like to change anything in their lifestyle so they prefer to ignore
this
 thing. In my opinion, it is normal but I think everyone needs to try new
things
. In conclusion, we can say that by trying something new
people
 have a chance to know more than doing nothing in familiar
places
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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