Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

These days, some inhabitants would prefer doing
things
which is like them,
for
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they try to go somewhere as well as eat something that they would like to eat, but another civilization
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to do the similar with. Personally, I firmly agree with the
first
point, that
people
prefer to do modern
things
that they like. From my perspective,
first
of all making a change in
life
person require
different
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thing,
for
example
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majority of
people
have a lot of time to spend a different thins
such
as
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activities, play some
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instruments, as well as travel somewhere that they want to visit. The main advantage is, it makes them confident,
feeling
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better, relax as well.
In
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they desire to live
life
in the same way as they do from childhood
untill
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until
today.
On the other hand
, having a familiar
things
experience is
also
beneficial for a person.
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words
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after visiting
a new places
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a new place
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or after doing
a
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things
they have
a knowledge
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also
experience about
that
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they have done.
However
, if
people
live the same
life
without a change in daily
life
,
then
easily thinks negative side and
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tired from
life
.
That is
why
,
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people
should always try
to
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new
thing
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during their
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life time
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. To sum up,
although
trying some different new
things
, person to their
life
and
also
more useful in many ways than strict with no change rules. In my view, trying different
things
is a
more
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better attitude.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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