Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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There is no doubt that
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of a public figure is not easy, especially when they are popular.
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many believe that these people have their fair share of hardships, I opine that it has more
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benefits
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I will discuss both sides of the argument and state my opinion
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matter.
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and foremost, those who believe that celebrities do not have any privacy might argue that these personalities are always in news and they are judged on every little action. One reason for
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media coverage has increased a lot in recent times, highlighting their private life more than their professional life and trying to create controversies.
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, even when a popular athlete
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to go for dinner with their friends or family, paparazzi still follow them to click
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and create some news.
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, if these media houses did not follow film stars everywhere, they would get some private time with their family.
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, I firmly believe that celebrities earn a huge amount of wealth
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of being popular.
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is because
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popular film stars
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millions of dollars for every film or project.
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, They
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get additional cash doing advertisements or endorsing a brand.
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, Shahrukh khan who is a popular actor in Bollywood
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is one of the richest
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in the world.
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, if Shahrukh khan had not been so
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, he would not have become one of the wealthiest
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on the
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whole
planet. In conclusion, while there can be some
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complications
being in the public eye all the time due to the lack of privacy, It can not be denied that public figures earn more than enough wealth via movie contracts, advertisements and endorsements
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compensate for these troubles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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