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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that primary school is the optimum period for young people to acquire a new
language
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. While
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 may have a number of disadvantages, I believe that the benefits greatly outweigh the drawbacks. Learning English at primary school may have some disadvantages.
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, it could threaten the ability of
children
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 in their mother
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,
children
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 may get confused about learning many
languages
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 at the same time.
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, it could be a waste of time since
children
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 need to focus on other intellectually developing subjects
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 as Math, Science, etc. which they might need more than the foreign one.
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, Their parents must pay more in order for their
children
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 to get early access to English. Parents must
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 be fluent in English in order to assist their
children
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 in learning more successfully. But not all parents can meet these conditions.
On the other hand
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, teaching foreign
languages
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 at an early age might have some merits.
Children
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 at a young age are fast learners because they are less self-conscious and shy. So they can easily pick up the right pronunciation and try to copy it. Learning a
second
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language
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 allows youngsters to build a stronger foundation in that
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. Learning another
language
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 has been proved in numerous studies to be beneficial to the brain, particularly in
children
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. Learning and speaking in both
languages
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, as well as translating from one
language
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 to another, allows the baby's brain to "work out" and enhance nervous system flexibility.
Children
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 who learn foreign
languages
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 develop the ability to filter out distracting information, enhancing their ability to absorb and retain a huge amount of new information. To summarize all of the above considerations, I believe that the benefits of learning a
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language
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 in childhood can exceed the disadvantages provided
children
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 are given sufficient support, care, and guidance.
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