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The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that
life
 will be worthless without a satisfying career and see jobs as the most important element.
However
, I agree with
this
 idea to a little extent. In my perspective, happiness is more important than work and the reason for living or being alive is more meaningful.
Firstly
, happiness is more crucial than work. job is for survival, is to earn enough money in order to support the family, to support the daily spending. Many
community
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 are suffering from
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the
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heavy
task
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. But
life
 is not only about working, but it is
also
 more about enjoyment and belongings. Other elements
such
 as family, hobbies or amusement can fill in the livelihood and bring more happiness and colour the
life
.
On the other hand
,
life
 can be meaningless without a satisfying career. As working is an action, it does not contain feelings or results. A person can not enjoy his
life
 unless he understands what does he effort for or the purpose of working.
For example
, somebody works for money while others work for their dream, it may be hard for an artist to acts as a businessman.
Therefore
, jobs out of position could cool down the passion and interest and without those passion,
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the soul
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 can be dim and hopeless. In conclusion,
job
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the job
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 is not the only part of living but a satisfying career can let
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 be more passionate. In my opinion, enjoying
life
 is the most significant reason for being alive and society can have an easier
life
 with the aim.
Last
 but not least,
life
 can be more meaningful and interesting by combining variable components.
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