In some countries, the number of shooting massacres is on the rise because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, it is argued that incidents of murders by means of guns have become highly common

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the people in possession of weapons at home. I second

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argument completely and in the following paragraphs reasons for my belief

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be discussed.

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, pistols and guns are meant to be the property of police and other law-keeping institutes and in spite of that, giving licences to the common population for no reason at all is a great security hazard.

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, someone with influence will ask for the ownership of a weapon by making a security threat as a reason.

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, public law enforcement institutes should be made strong enough to deal with

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conditions all by themselves with ease.

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, in many countries, there is no accountability for local companies manufacturing mass weapons and selling them illegally in common markets.

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, criminal gangs are increasing in numbers and so are the incidences of street crimes and assassinations.

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, in America, states where the violence rate is high, are reported to be supporting personal handling of self-safety by using any means possible at the government level.

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, people do not hesitate to take a pistol out at any argument of minor detail and domestic killings and runaways are

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enhancing the numbers.

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self-defence comes first ,no one should be doing it all by themselves and should trust government departments for that.

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, authorities should

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make efforts to let society feel secure and safe and they must not

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the need

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weapons for safety.

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,I believe that though keeping oneself safe is a priority for all, the uncontrolled spread of the menace of destructive objects will surely result in domestic and street killings

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