Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
As it enunciated by proportion,
criminals
always be a criminal after doing such
pathetic situation
. Owing to various social and personal considerations I thoroughly agree with Fix the agreement mistake
situations
this
concern. Because, when engaging with those activities
maybe not perpetuated as an
optimistic attitudes and behaviours. As well as, society will be not welcomed them in any situation and the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
community
will be isolated them according to their previous behaviour.
Heavy criticism and expression about criminals
' acts
may have calamitous
for the Correct your spelling
calamities
community
as well as others. There are validated evidence to prove that people
who mingle with criminal acts
they
will be not Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
good person anymore. Correct article usage
apply
They
only likely to act as a criminal because they can earn Add a verb
areThey
wereThey
money
in a fast way. They will only follow for money
. As well as having to desire for money
they will be doing any activity without thinking about their reputation which may accelerate their internal aggression, ruthlessness, immorality, hearted actions for a
wealthy Correct article usage
apply
people
. So, no denying that, people
who come from the
poor-social family backgrounds Correct article usage
apply
they
will tend to do those Correct pronoun usage
apply
activities
due to the lack of facilities and jealousy of others. Therefore
, they will be thoroughly bound with those acts
to survive. For example
, the recent research article introduces criminal
behind reasons, it may elaborate all other aspects, why they doing these Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
activities
again ; because of the lack of facilities, money
, starvation, the hunger they tend to mingle with those activities
to earn money
in a fast way.
Moreover
, Offenders and people
who come from criminals
' family backgrounds, communities will be not welcomed and accepted them
for society to mingle with any situation. Because they will be isolated, marginalised, discriminated against due to the criminal Correct pronoun usage
apply
acts
. They could not interact with a proper job as a good carrier. And under those, circumstances criminals
never work with the community
. Then
it may boost hearted thoughts between them. They will kill them. It may accelerate internal aggression which may defeat criminals
inner inborn skills in order to lack social welcome. Change noun form
criminals'
criminal's
For instance
, most the offences have inner skills, it may boost in prison bet without social welcome and isolation it will be destroyed.
To sum up, people
who mingle with criminal action have Correct your spelling
no
not
chance to be a better person with society due to the peoples’ stupid ideas. Due to theAdd the particle
tonot
,
consequences they will not interact with the Remove the comma
apply
community
. They will through interactions with those pathetic activities
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