The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

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The lack of enough drinkable
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one of the most serious issues of our society and it eventually might even lead to a global drought. Various reasons have led to
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situation, but
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there are some measures we can take to prevent and stop
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issue. As it comes to the reasons why
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, perhaps one of the main ones is industrial waste. Over the years, people have dumped their waste into the rivers, canals etc. rather than throwing it in
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, polluting the
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providing seas have become so much polluted that they can no longer be
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useful
for drinking, causing
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drinkable
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to decrease. The other reason is climate change and global warming. Many
water
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sources are decreasing
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because of changes in the
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temperature
, leading to a situation where only a few
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of
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might be available for humans and animals in the near future. Despite the causes, there are several solutions that we can do, in order to save
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and prevent future disasters. One of the
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things that we can do is
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and
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educating
the population about the importance of
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and the possible outcomes of them polluting the natural sources
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as seas, rivers etc.
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, educating children in school
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can be a wise start, because the root of our future depends on the new generation. The government of developing or developed countries should
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put a restricted
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against those companies or industry units that
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pollute
pollution
sanitary
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. Other measures that we can take is to stop illegal hunting, logging or using too many plastic products so that we can try to stop the progression of climate change, which is a major factor in decreased drinkable
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. In
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is decreasing because of climate change and humans invading and polluting
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sources, there still are solutions
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as better education, restricted laws and regulations to prevent
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further
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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