Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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everyone unhealthy and facing different kinds of health problems. In my opinion,

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having a balanced diet which includes fish and

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healthier and stronger.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

52 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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chronic diseases
balanced diet
nutritional deficiencies
plant-based diet
ethical concerns
environmental impact
deforestation
greenhouse gas emissions
sustainable
Vitamin B12
processed meat substitutes
social and cultural implications
mitigate
full-time vegetarian
plant-based options
health benefits
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Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

Some people believe that family is more important than friends. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Topic: In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. the only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?