Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. discuss both viewa and give your opinion.

Some human beings consider that pupils seem to rely on each other.
However
, many people contradict
this
statement. Overall, Everyone has their own opinion according to their view and observation, I
also
consider, In
this
era, Homo sapiens is running for the state of being independent. But ,
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they rely on each other.
Firstly
, Everyone has their own special ability, and they are master in it,
as a result
, they are attached to one field.
For example
, if a person is having a severe fever, he needs to seek a doctor because he cannot treat himself.
However
, being independent still has to be reliant on others.Every task demands a different person who can fit it. It is impossible to perform in all criteria.
On the other hand
, People say, they are independent because they owe money by acquiring a job in their respective field, later, they spend it for completion of their demand and requirement.
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human being
also
depends on animal and plants for their food, just by moving ahead in a futuristic world, people cannot become independent. Due to the fact, every male sex demand female for germinating new baby.
Moreover
, from the initial centuries, pupils came to be dependent and will be, only ways got changed, and the method of reliability got standard, it is not omitted. Putting everything in nutshell, everyone lies on
this
planet are dependent on each other, just the roads were got modified ,
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the terms are the same. Achieving as much ahead in future, pupils to
toneed
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to need
demand each other for their completion.
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