In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healtier than ever before. However, they are often less happy and more agiatated in actions and behaviors. what do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?
Happiness is not any kind of product that we can measure, it is a state of the human mind. In
this
contemporary world, many nations provide a better job with sufficient wage , safety and healthy environment to their youngsters but they are not satisfied as well as they are committed by evil deeds. I will depict the reasons and possible solutions in an essay.
On the one hand, earning money
from an early age gives unnecessary freedom to children
which is very harmful to them. For instance
, as per the research of Nepal universities found that 80% of teenagers like to tackle issues by themselves and it's ruining their happiness. As they are not well experienced in this
term, they feel tense when they would not be successful and they would have tried to take more challenges reaching in their goal. As a result
, having enough money
has not made them happy. A possible solution would be for solving this
problem, parents need to be careful more with their children
and need to be their friend as offspring can share every kind of issues with them.
On the other hand
, having a lot of pennies at this
age ,especially in the term of high school has a major chance to addict ones to taking drugs. If infants earn a huge amount of money
to expense their necessary things but they can not cost the whole amount of cash they have started to think about how will they can expense the remaining money
. Following this
term, sometimes they have taken drugs. For example
, a drug enforcement commission said that from 14 to 18 years old school going children
who are earning money
and can not cost it wisely, most of the time they are committed to taking drugs. To get rid of this
problem, the government can pass a law that every student should be opened a savings account in a bank to save their money
which they would use for their higher study.
In conclusion, there is a proverb that money
can not buy happiness, it is just a way to fulfil one's demand. Therefore
, earning adequate money
and providing safety can not give satisfaction to children
. So, keeping them happy and well in behaviour parents and governments have to be more aware of their responsibilities.Submitted by sporshiajyoti on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- however
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