International tourism has become more popular in recent decades. However, this can have a considerable impact on the countries which attract large numbers of visitors. What positive and negative effects does tourism have on countries which are popular destinations?

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has been bloomed during recent pass

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, it may give rise to benefits and drawbacks to some popular tourist

destinations

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. growth of the local economy and improving the social status of the citizens are the major positive points of

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new development while social

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and health-related

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are the major negatives. In the following essay ,

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writer goes to

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elaborate on these matters .

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with , most of the tourists who are travelling to these world popular countries are young generations .

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, they are the parts of society that active in sexuality and involved in most of the narcotic drug consumption in society. Unfortunately, when

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group ended up in these popular tourist

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, local communities will invariably experience

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like drug trafficking and sexually transmitted diseases.

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, according to the information from the health authorities in Sri Lanka , the number of HIV infected persons has been doubled in

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decade compared to the

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decade , mainly in famous tourist

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like Ella and Chillow.

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, with the development of

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industry

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,life has changed for most of the citizens in these popular travelling

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, there have been some major developments in the infrastructure and basic-human facilities in these countries in view of attracting more number of tourists and indirectly

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has been benefited the locals as well .

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, according to the Sri Lankan central bank around 25% of the country's GDP has come through the

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industry

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and 30% of the working population ,involved in jobs related to the

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industry

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during the

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decade. In conclusion , the worldwide

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industry

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has been improving for the

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few decades and people have been getting benefits economically

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they have been facing some increased social and health-related

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. Since

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writer wishes to suggest governments take necessary actions when they are planning the

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development of

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industry

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International tourism has become more popular in recent decades. However, this can have a considerable impact on the countries which attract large numbers of visitors. What positive and negative effects does tourism have on countries which are popular destinations?

Your opinion

Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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