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Band 8.5

One of your colleagues Recently got a new job at another Company. Write a letter to him and say you feel about him What you enjoy the most while working together Ask what is future plans are

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
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 letter regarding the new job you recently got. In my opinion, it will be a big loss for the company, your work is priceless, and what's more, you have a lot of experience. I believe it will be very difficult to find someone to replace you.
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, everyone in the branch thinks the same, we will lose a very good co-worker and a friend. Working with you was a pleasure, what's more, I think you are a very intelligent and hardworking guy, and it would be great if all our team could meet sometimes to talk and drink some beers even when you leave the company.
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 but not least, what is your plan for the future? Are you going to take a little holiday now, or start the job directly? Good luck in your career and I am looking forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, George

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task achievement
Consider expanding on why your colleague's experience is highly valued. This could provide more depth to your appreciation of him.
coherence cohesion
You could further refine the logical flow by providing a smoother transition between paragraphs, ensuring each idea leads naturally to the next.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is warm, appreciative, and genuinely friendly, which perfectly matches the context of writing to a colleague who is leaving.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute to the overall professionalism and warmth of the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • congratulations
  • appreciate
  • collaboration
  • endeavors
  • future prospects
  • role
  • responsibilities
  • career advancement
  • projects
  • work environment
  • transition
  • keep in touch
  • fortunate
  • professional growth
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