Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. others think education and training are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When a person decides to break the

law

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,

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his or her responsibility to take their own punishment.

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, sending

criminals

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to

jail

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is an effective and necessary method to penalize

offenders

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.

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The statistic

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shows that more than 80

percentage

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of

criminals

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can’t find a

propre

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proper

job or have

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a problem

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problem

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back to social life after

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released from

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jail

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a jail

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term. And the main factor which causes

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situation is

offenders

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have lost their connection to

outside

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world during prison.

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,

rehabilitation

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program

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programs

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become a major resource for

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a prisoner

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prisoner

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prisoners

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to be re-introduced to society. Personally, I believe that

jail

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term

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and

rehabilitation

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program

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programs

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are both essential and important for

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law breakers

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lawbreakers

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.

Firstly

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, sending

criminals

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to prison is a vital punishment after breaking the

law

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.

Law

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is an essential and powerful rule to maintain public security. If a person breaks the basic rules,

it’s

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necessary to be punished. And

jail

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presents a classic and safe environment

such

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as no connection to

outside

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world and life without freedom, which is effective for

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law breakers

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lawbreakers

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to introspect themselves.

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,

it’s

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a good way to keep those violent

offenders

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away from society, which ensures the safety of other citizens.

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to create

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a

rehabilitation

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program

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for

criminals

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is a significant part for them to be re-introduced to society.

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program

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, it provides therapies and training in both physical and mental.

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, they have group therapy for

criminals

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who have

mental

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a mental

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issue

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issues

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and to give them a proper way to support and release their negative

emotion

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emotions

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instead

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of hurting others.

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, providing professional skills courses for prisoners helps them to find a real job and have a better life after

jail

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term. To sum up,

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essential and critical to send lawbreakers to prisons and join

rehabilitation

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programs after their severe mistakes. Jails have the environment for

offenders

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to reflect on themselves and re-education or training programs are ways to give them a chance to be re-joined to the community.