Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. others think education and training are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When a person decides to break the

law

,

it’s

his or her responsibility to take their own punishment.

Thus

, sending

criminals

to

jail

is an effective and necessary method to penalize

offenders

.

Statistic

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shows that more than 80

percentage

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of

criminals

can’t find a

propre

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proper

job or have

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a problem

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problem

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problems

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back to social life after

been

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released from

jail

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a jail

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term. And the main factor which causes

this

situation is

offenders

have lost their connection to

outside

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the outside

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world during prison.

Furthermore

,

rehabilitation

program

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programs

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become a major resource for

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a prisoner

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prisoner

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prisoners

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to be re-introduced to society. Personally, I believe that

jail

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terms

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and

rehabilitation

program

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programs

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are both essential and important for

law breakers

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lawbreakers

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.

Firstly

, sending

criminals

to prison is a vital punishment after breaking the

law

.

Law

is an essential and powerful rule to maintain public security. If a person breaks the basic rules,

it’s

necessary to be punished. And

jail

presents a classic and safe environment

such

as no connection to

outside

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world and life without freedom, which is effective for

law breakers

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lawbreakers

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to introspect themselves.

Furthermore

,

it’s

a good way to keep those violent

offenders

away from society, which ensures the safety of other citizens.

On the other hand

,

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a

rehabilitation

program

for

criminals

is a significant part for them to be re-introduced to society.

In the

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program

, it provides therapies and training in both physical and mental.

For instance

, they have group therapy for

criminals

who have

mental

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a mental

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issue

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issues

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and to give them a proper way to support and release their negative

emotion

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emotions

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instead

of hurting others.

In addition

, providing professional skills courses for prisoners helps them to find a real job and have a better life after

jail

term. To sum up,

it’s

essential and critical to send lawbreakers to prisons and join

rehabilitation

programs after their severe mistakes. Jails have the environment for

offenders

to reflect on themselves and re-education or training programs are ways to give them a chance to be re-joined to the community.