Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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their family or friends, what aspects of technology have influenced the types of
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negative or
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positive? For the
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think online social networking platforms let
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what kind of relationships
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a boy saw a girl and her photos on a social media application,
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, after chatting with the girl,
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probably will want to be her boyfriend. For another
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is when a person made a new friend,and they always have a good chat, they might be will become friends. For the
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think it is
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positive progress for adults because they have
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to stop the negative changes and keep the positive ones,
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,at the same time they are looking at their watch,in order not to waste so much time that they can’t allocate enough time to work. But
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children face the internet, video games,and
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social application,they do not have sufficient ability to distinguish are these things good or bad,
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good progress. In conclusion,
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think
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app
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relationships
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want to make.Technology is become a positive development for adults,and become a negative development for kids.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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