Task 2: Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that regulating the level of
violence
in
film
on platform TV and the cinema is necessary. Others,
however
, feel that the
violence
in the
film
occupies a very important position
then
regulating it is impossible. In
this
essay, In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain my personal view of
violence
should regulate the level is lower than
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. We can’t deny that the violent scene is important in
films
and it can decide the success of a movie but at
this
time, I want to reduce the level of it.
Firstly
, the program
film
on TV is usual in all of the family which the youth groups to elder groups can approach it. Because of common telefilms, too many violent or action hot
scenes
may have an adverse effect on the amount of groupage. We can’t accept that children watch violent
scenes
too much because it can affect their personality in the future and the elderly when they see it can be
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of dining customs.
Secondly
, movies with many violent
scenes
may reduce the value of content in some aspects. I agree that
films
need hot
scenes
but if they don’t maintain anything about lessons or high entertainment, I don’t think
that is
a good movie to watch.
On the other hand
, there are those who think that regulating it in
films
is unnecessary for some reason.
First
, the
violence
can touch the highest mood of the viewer and make an important contribution to the
films
. I said that because the factors create a successful
film
based on the value they give it and the various
scenes
that attract them.
Furthermore
, it's a preference for some people.
Therefore
, I won't discuss it in
this
case because it's your personal view. In conclusion, I would say that
films
on television need to regulate it because of the commonality and usual of it.
Besides
that, movies at the cinema can be more open about the scene but we need to limit the age of each
film
to suit all groups of groupage.
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