These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, numerous people choose to have a trip because it is possible

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other countries in a not tough way as in the past. For

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reason,

tourism

has undergone

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considerably

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growth. The advantages of

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trend could be

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possible to visit

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a straightforward way all

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of the world. The opportunity to discover

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culture is noteworthily improved. Thanks to

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development, trips are more comfortable and

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than in past years. In

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, modern facilities have contributed to a substantial fall

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prices.

Consequently

, more

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could choose to travel.

On the other hand

, the impact of

tourism

climb caused a huge percentage often carbon dioxide emissions. In fact,

this

phenomenon is significantly harmful

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the environment. Immense infrastructures, that are linked by

this

trend,

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as airports, holiday residents, trains, motorways are responsible

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the rise of pollution. In my view, the advantages

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the disadvantages.

Firstly

,

tourism

is crucial for economic reasons.

Secondly

, countries tend to take care of their attractions and

this

is essential to avoid the loss of cities potential. To conclude, I strongly believe that the advantages are fundamental for the world.

tourism

not only the is positive for countries, that make a profit, but

also

for tourists because travelling contributes to individual growth. At the same time, I think that pollution is a current problem and that people should pay more attention to their choices when they travel regarding

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,

for instance

, they should prefer public

transports

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instead

of cars or

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local food.