many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problem. sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do u agree or disagree?
Although
sugar is counted as one
of the most dangerous ingredients for human overall health, it can be found in many foods and drink products
. Bearing this
fact in mind a controversial question which might arise is whether is increasing the price of these manufactured products
is a good decision to reduce the amount of the consumption or not. I fundamentally disagree with the notion that raising the cost in order to reduce the dangers. This
will be supported by various reasons in this
essay.
First
of all, there is a widely held view that foods and drinks which are made of sugar have always been delicious and they have their own life-long-time fan. For example
, Coca-Cola, the first
brand of soda which nowadays is One
of the top-ranked products
in the market. passing the time its rate has changed, however
, it is still eye-catching in the supermarket's rows and people pay the price, no matter how much it is. Furthermore
, it is basically believed that Sugar is one
of the main ingredients of all sweeties and candies. The most mesmerizing junk food cannot be removed from any grocery, stores and markets. As we have been witnessed after a 200% rate of inflation in this
field, due to the restrictions, there can be seen a lot of high-priced chocolate and cookies in stores.
Subsequently
, it is said that by doing this
a lot of businesses like confectioneries will have affected and they going to put in trouble. In another word, they would be faced with absolute damage as their product has to be sold fresh. If This
won't be able, no one
can trust them and nobody buys anything anymore consequently
, the range of their sales will have sharply decreased.
To sum up, changing the fee of food and drink products
cannot be a proper solution to bring down the amount of usage of that.Submitted by sarlakd.sign10 on
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