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today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
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money
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 should be imperative to reside in the globe because every item involved
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a higher price,so a proportion of society ruminates that institutions should instruct their scholars how to spend
money
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 without spending on unnecessary
things
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,but I strongly disagree with
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 statement.
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 statement is the main dominant reason is that I believe that it is our responsibility to cut our unnecessary
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.
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,if the
schools
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 start teaching about financial matters to their students,
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 they can be more
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money minded
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 persons at a young age only.
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,it will result in
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 on their studies.
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,
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 teachers use to teach their scholars how to survive financially,they are not able to understand what they are teaching
beacuse
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because
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the
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young people are immatured.
additionally
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,it involves
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a higher costs
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 as
schools
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 will be provided by a special teacher who experts in financial matters.
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,
schools
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 will not only ensure faculties for the main subjects but
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 enable another faculty who teaches a financial subject. On another hand,it does not requires
to teach
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 about the usage of
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 at
schools
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 because we can be automatically inculcated with the importance of capital by seeing all other people who are residing with us.
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,there is
also
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 one important factor to increase the expenditure which is attractiveness.
for example
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,these days,many individuals are attracting towards the
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 easily.
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,people tend to purchase all
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,even though they do not want that
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. To conclude,teachers should not instruct their students how to live financially because it is a waste of time for students and they can not be able to understand
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financial matters because they are immatured,
therefore
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 everyone should try to cut their expenditures.
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