today's school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern scenario,the managing of

money

should be imperative to reside in the globe because every item involved

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a higher price,so a proportion of society ruminates that institutions should instruct their scholars how to spend

money

without spending on unnecessary

things

,but I strongly disagree with

this

statement.

this

essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,why I am disaccord with

this

statement is the main dominant reason is that I believe that it is our responsibility to cut our unnecessary

things

.

moreover

,if the

schools

start teaching about financial matters to their students,

then

they can be more

money minded

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persons at a young age only.

consequently

,it will result in

impact

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on their studies.

furthermore

,

although

teachers use to teach their scholars how to survive financially,they are not able to understand what they are teaching

beacuse

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because

most

of

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the

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young people are immatured.

additionally

,it involves

with

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a higher costs

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as

schools

will be provided by a special teacher who experts in financial matters.

for instance

,

schools

will not only ensure faculties for the main subjects but

also

enable another faculty who teaches a financial subject. On another hand,it does not requires

to teach

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about the usage of

money

at

schools

because we can be automatically inculcated with the importance of capital by seeing all other people who are residing with us.

moreover

,there is

also

one important factor to increase the expenditure which is attractiveness.

for example

,these days,many individuals are attracting towards the

things

easily.

as a result

,people tend to purchase all

things

,even though they do not want that

things

. To conclude,teachers should not instruct their students how to live financially because it is a waste of time for students and they can not be able to understand

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financial matters because they are immatured,

therefore

everyone should try to cut their expenditures.