Write about the following topic. To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is a continuing argument about whether
government
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should approve eating
insects
to solve the problem of the shortage of food
resource
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. Many
people
consider it beneficial, while others hold different opinions. In
this
essay, I will
further
explain both
negative
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and positive effects of intaking
insects
. Bugs can have great
nutritions
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, but they can
also
make
people
sick.
People
believe that insect is one of the good
resource
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resources
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of protein, which is one of the vital elements for
human
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being.
However
, there is a high chance that they carry bacteria in their bodies. If we eat any of them without proper cleaning methods, we may be ill.
For example
, stomachache, fever, and dizziness are all the symptoms that can happen to us once the bacteria
is
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in our body. Eating is supposed to bring energy
for
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our organs, not to break down the
immute
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immune
system. There is a wide range of
insects
in the world, but the experts have not learned
every
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of them yet. Some
people
think that
this
is an exciting fact because we can always discover new
flavors
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.
Moreover
, with the various spices
among
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the world, it is likely to season
insects
into tasty snacks.
For instance
, cockroach barbeque is sold as street food in South East Asia.
Nevertheless
, not understanding all the attributes of every
insects
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insect
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means that it is possible to consume poisonous species by accident. It can be risky to start putting
insects
in the cusine before we acquire enough knowledge. To sum up, adding
insects
in
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to
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the dish can bring proteins and new
flavors
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to food.
On the other hand
, we can get sick from the bacteria or be poisoned due to the lack of knowledge.
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