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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days
people
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 tend to migrate to another nation either for their study or work.
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, I
am totally agree
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 with
this
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statmement
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statement
. they are suffering from an inability to interact with their local
language
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 which has some practical and social issues.
Fristly
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Firstly
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, It is obvious that living as an international person may perpetuate different social problems throughout their life. Thisthis manifested in numerous ways, So, when the
people
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 are mingling with government or local services they may feel some misery situation due to the
language
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 barrier.
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, Most international
people
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 should engage with the state for their migration.
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, they may be disappointed with their
language
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 because of their inability to speak the
language
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.
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 may deeply elaborate on some pathetic incidence as their face as a social issue.
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, It is crystal clear that discrimination, marginalisation, isolation, lack of belonging are the major issue for
people
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 who live in different countries. Family sickness, loneliness
also
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 may perpetuate as practice issues when mingling with different communities. As an illustration, France and Spain have their mother tongue they never interact with the international
language
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;
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,
people
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 who live in that ,
the
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country may feel isolated, discriminated against, marginalisation owing to the lack of
language
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. To sum up, mingling with different nations may perpetuate different social and personal issues to tourists.
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 as they may feel gruesome attitudes when they interact with others as well as socially when they go to meet any institute it may feel misery for them due to the
language
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 barrier.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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