The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that renovating the old

buildings

in major cities around the globe costs a huge amount of

money

from the government. While

,

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others think that

money

should

be utilize

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in developing

roads

and new houses. I strongly agree with the maintenance of historic

buildings

to improve the economy of the country. Admittedly, renovating a historic building that was famous in the century is one way to attract local and international tourists to visit that place.

This

is to ameliorate the economy of the country by providing jobs to the

local

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.

For example

, Malacanang of the North is a popular visitors destination in the Philippines, it is where the former president Marcos and his family lived. The building was surrounded by a lake which added beauty to that place.

This

renowned-building

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attract visitors around the globe and

still

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visited as of today.

As a result

, it adds revenue to

government

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the government

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to improve

roads

and public infrastructures.

On the other hand

, other individuals perceive that

money

should

be spend

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in

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public infrastructures for the citizen to utilize.

For instance

,

roads

should be maintained by using concrete and asphalt

especially

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to

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remote areas.

This

, helps the

local

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locals

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to travel to the city and attract local and international tourists to visit a particular place.

Furthermore

, investing

to

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in

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public

buildings

such

as schools is one way to enhance and engage the learning of students to finish their studies. In conclusion,

while

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some individuals

asserts

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that government

money

should be used in

infractures

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fractures

in fractures

such

as

roads

and public

buildings

. I believe that maintaining and renovating historic places are assets

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the economy and raise the standard

living

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of the nation.