The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that renovating the old
buildings
in major cities around the globe costs a huge amount of money
from the government. While,
others think that Remove the comma
apply
money
should be utilize
in developing Change the verb form
be utilized
roads
and new houses. I strongly agree with the maintenance of historic buildings
to improve the economy of the country.
Admittedly, renovating a historic building that was famous in the century is one way to attract local and international tourists to visit that place. This
is to ameliorate the economy of the country by providing jobs to the local
. Fix the agreement mistake
locals
For example
, Malacanang of the North is a popular visitors destination in the Philippines, it is where the former president Marcos and his family lived. The building was surrounded by a lake which added beauty to that place. This
renowned-building
attract visitors around the globe and Correct your spelling
renowned building
still
visited as of today. Add a missing verb
is still
As a result
, it adds revenue to government
to improve Add an article
the government
roads
and public infrastructures.
On the other hand
, other individuals perceive that money
should be spend
Change the verb form
be spent
in
public infrastructures for the citizen to utilize. Change preposition
on
For instance
, roads
should be maintained by using concrete and asphalt especially
Add the comma(s)
,especially
to
remote areas. Change preposition
in
This
, helps the local
to travel to the city and attract local and international tourists to visit a particular place. Fix the agreement mistake
locals
Furthermore
, investing to
public Change preposition
in
buildings
such
as schools is one way to enhance and engage the learning of students to finish their studies.
In conclusion, while
some individuals Correct word choice
apply
asserts
that government Change the verb form
assert
money
should be used in infractures
Correct your spelling
fractures
in fractures
such
as roads
and public buildings
. I believe that maintaining and renovating historic places are assets boost
the economy and raise the standard Correct pronoun usage
that boost
living
of the nation.Change preposition
of living
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