Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a fact that many countries are still facing poverty as one of the major obstacles in their

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. Even though wealthy nations

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their counterparts to irradicate

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state

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, still it doesn't bring major changes. Due to

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, many economists around the world are thought that eradication of

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particular condition not only depends on monetary help but

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on other means

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as science, technology and

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. I completely agree with

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argument as it would help to

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bring

the

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to an incredibly higher level rather than a

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for time being.

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, the advancement of science and technology changes the way of life of human beings. Unfortunately, every part of the earth has not benefitted from

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, developed countries must share their expertise with those who are deprived it of.

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, the

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of sustainable sources of energy is one of the prime requirements in today's world. If a developed

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like Germany, helps an African

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like, Nigeria, it would be a great

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in their

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. Availability of energy leads to creating numerous job opportunities which ultimately raises the standard of living of the people.

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,

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is the way of empowerment. If people get educated, the

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would be changed amazingly.

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, wealthy countries should share their resources in

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field with others.

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, If a

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,

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the

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of infrastructure for

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or sends teachers to a poor place like Ghana, it would help them to provide at least basic

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to its citizens. Trained and talented human resources surely bring changes in the fate of their

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. To conclude, only monetary help will not change the

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of a

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.

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, sharing advancement in the field of science and technology and

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will

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bring

a

country

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from its

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of deprivation.

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, the rich part of the world should focus on different means of

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to change the

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of their weaker counterparts.