You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter - tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it. - describe what you learnt in your current job - and ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment

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Dear Sir, I hope you are well. I am writing to inform you of some important news. I have

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graduated from my university and have got my master's degree in electrical engineering. I am considering looking for a job in the electrical sector, and I will leave the company in one to two months because I am eager to try my skill

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process development in an electric car business. Ms Krittiya, thank you very much for your guidance. I have learned many abilities

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as negotiation skills, logical thinking as a process engineer, multi-task skills and holding meetings, over the

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two years.

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, Now I make coffee like a god. I would like to ask you for support with a reference letter for my future employment. If you do not mind, I will send you the first draft in the next week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Krittipong Wongkamchan.

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Task Achievement & Coherence and Cohesion

Provide a clearer explanation of the reason for leaving which directly relates to your new qualification and future ambitions. Offer a smoother transition between paragraphs for enhanced coherence.

Suitable Writing Tone

Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter to suit the context of a resignation letter to your manager.

Lexical Resource & Grammatical Range

Use a variety of complex structures to demonstrate grammatical range. Avoid informal language like 'make coffee like a god.' instead use formal language.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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