Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violent influence on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, bad effects from scenes in some

films

are inevitable. Society often argues that the

government

should make regulations toward violent

films

.

Nonetheless

, others think regulating these

films

is not important. It seems to me that

government

should regulate the violence level of cinema.

This

essay will discuss the views of both arguments.

To begin

with, generally, people like to watch full movies rather than censored movies with some cutting on violent scenes. By giving some censorship in part of the

movie

, the audience will confuse with the flow of the

film

. Some brutal acting might be the climax part which plays an important role in the show.

For instance

, an action

film

from Korea called murder was trending in Indonesia a year ago. Due to censored regulation, the

film

has to follow the rule.

This

phenomenon affected the rating of

this

show. Most Indonesian gave less than 6 out of 10 stars. That was sad because

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movie

was great, it reveals

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person but the audience did not satisfy as some parts got cut. In stark contrast to

this

, the

government

as a regulator should decide wisely the rule on brutal

film

with some consideration on the audience's point of view.

Firstly

, People can copy and learn violent stuff from the

movie

. They can have some imaginations while watching the

films

and later can apply

this

brutal action to others in their life.

In addition

, regulating the standard of violence is

also

a good decision.

Government

can categorize which movies belong to small, medium and high brutal scenes. When it comes to high brutal

films

, only 21-year-old people can watch the

movie

. For a small part of violence, all ages can watch the

film

. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that both opinions have their own implication. I believe by making a rule on

this

issue, our

film

industry will be more developed than ever before.