Some people believe that online study is more effective that on campus while others disagree. Discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of online study.
In recent times almost all of the tasks were switched into online
mode
. To continue schooling, teachers started teaching students
through online classes. It is believed by some people that going to the school is more effective way while some disagree. This
essay will brief out the advantage and disadvantages of these online classes.
There could be many drawbacks of online mode
. Firstly
, the routine of going early to bed and waking up early in the morning is completely disturbed. As a result
of this
children are getting lazy and losing their fitness. Secondly
, they are missing their activities such
as playing with their friends. In addition
to ,this
they are losing their freedom of going out in a fresh and open environment. Therefore
, they are becoming more and more aggressive towards many situations. An example of this
could be the dull faces of children throughout the day.
Whereas classes can be taken from anywhere without actually going to school, is the main advantage of this
online mode
. Students
can travel anywhere and can attend their schooling. Such
as you can visit a park and could be present in the class simultaneously. Meanwhile, the lectures could be reviewed anytime, since they all are recorded. Thus
enabling students
to brush up on their content. For instance
, watching the Zoom recorded lecture.
To summarize, this
online way is equally beneficial and harmful in some aspects. This
mode
of education is harmful to students
from the physical health point of view. On the other hand
, it’s helpful in exam times to brush up on the content.Submitted by ayushgoswami25 on
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