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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
Most of the biggest
cities
 in the world are becoming a black hole of pollution and
traffic
, which affect directly the time
spend
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 to go to work and the health of the employees. A
courage
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 decision needs to be taken to reduce the pressure in the
centers
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 of the city by
prohibit
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 the private from entering those places. For many reasons, I believe that
this
 is the best solution to have a better image of the
cities
. The most important reason is pollution from cars and
motorcycle
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, which impact the quality of the life in the
cities
, especially those with a big population
such
 as Paris, London, and Madrid. The major problem that has been confirmed by the studies Is that Pollutants from cars can cause a range of health problems, from allergies and skin irritation to heart disease and respiratory problems
such
 as asthma.
Furthermore
, Long-term repeated exposure to diesel exhaust fumes may
also
 increase the risk of lung cancer, according to the World Health Organization. A
second
 reason is that some of those
cities
 are not designed for motor
traffic
, so they cannot withstand the pressure of
traffic
. a huge number of car accidents had been registered.
Finally
, I believe
cities
 should be car-free because pollution needs to be stopped. As
solution
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, we need to choose to drive when our destination is only a block away. We can use different forms of transportation
instead
,
such
 as bicycles and buses. In conclusion,
therefore
, I strongly support the idea that
traffic
 should be banned from the city
centers
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, as
this
 would enable people to rediscover
cities
 as pleasant and healthy
place
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 to live as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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