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deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment. what do you think can be done to solve this problem? support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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In
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 contemporary
world
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, some
people
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 are cutting down an array of
trees
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 only for their own profit. The removal of a large number of
trees
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 has a tremendous negative impact on our environment and it occurs myriad issues
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 as
soil
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 erosion, flood, drought, heatwaves, acid rain etc. In
this
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 essay; I will depict the reasons and examples. On the one hand, logging gets deteriorate day by day in the whole
world
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 and it damages our ecosystem. Wood has been used since the ancient period for furnishing the room as well as a pillar of a house and because of
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people
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 cut
trees
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 randomly and destroy terrestrial and aquatic animals.
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, a research group in Chicago found that more than 70% of animals live in
trees
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 and they have continued a food chain with other animals which are living in the water.
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, they lost their house and die off easily which affects our biodiversity. To regulate
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 situation; government should take proper steps or imposed a ban on cutting down
trees
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.
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,
trees
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 are used as a fuel or producing coal so, many
people
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 have cut down
trees
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 which enhance our environment pollution.
Trees
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 work as a defender to defence our natural area from pollution.
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,
trees
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 play a significant role to break
soil
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 erosion and water pollution. Deforestation has vanished the stability of
soil
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 and it erodes the
soil
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 from the shore of the river which is
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 polluting the water. At the same time, land has become barren for the erosion of
soil
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 and it harms our agriculture.
People
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 need to be aware of
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 problem which is occurring for felling
trees
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 and they might promise to plant two
trees
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 if they cut one. In conclusion, nowadays, the whole
world
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 gets worse environmentally because of deforestation.
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, we need to be more conscious to regulate the cut-down
trees
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 and must help the government to mitigate
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 problem and to save the
world
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • sustainable living
  • ecosystem balance
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • illegal logging
  • land clearing
  • afforestation
  • reforestation
  • agroforestry
  • conservation efforts
  • economic incentives
  • technological innovations
  • forest management
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