Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People

have different views on whether watching foreign

films

is advantageous. While some argue that it can have minus points on local culture, I strongly believe that watching foreign

films

can have benefits. There are several reasons that make

people

think that watching foreign

films

has a negative impact.

Firstly

, young generations' lifestyles can be affected when they watch foreign

films

That is

because some actions in

films

are suitable for foreign culture, while it is not allowed in other ones.

In addition

, foreign

films

tend to be about fiction and action, which can affect some

people

's behaviour.

For instance

, the quality of Hollywood action or fiction movies are blockbusters

then

it makes

people

watch it so many times. After that

people

think they have power like a character in

films

, so they have dangerous behaviours for another.

In contrast

, I believe that foreign movies should be chosen to watch because of their benefits.

Firstly

, when

people

watch a foreign movie, they can learn or improve their language skills. Nowadays,

people

,who can speak English or other languages, are one of their strengths and it can help them in their life.

Therefore

, if

people

want to enhance their

second

language, watching

films

will be one of the ways to do that. And the other advantage is that youngsters can choose to watch

films

like courses to learn about the culture and

people

then

they have to promote for improve their country. In conclusion, watching foreign movies have many benefits for audiences but it has to control or select content.

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