The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the development of an
island
in terms of the tourist facilities
’ constructions
. Fix the agreement mistake
construction
Overall
, a comparison of two
maps reveals the main noticeable construction focuses on additional accommodations and public Correct article usage
the two
transportations
Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
such
as dock and vehicle tracks while
before the island
do not have any facilities
at all.
Before the construction, the island
consists of coconut plants that grow in several places of the island
while
the majority of the land is empty spaces without any noticeable facilities
or even plants. After the construction, the most dramatic improvement is the establishment of accommodation and public facilities
. The center
of the Change the spelling
centre
facilities
is a reception building where the vehicle track is established surrounded
it and the group of houses are placed Wrong verb form
surrounding
in
the right and left side of Change preposition
on
this
building where they are built in a circle. In addition
, each house is connected with
footpaths. Other Change preposition
by
facilities
are a restaurant and a pier that is
installed on the north and south side of the reception building, respectively. While
most of the facilities
are constructed that cover two-thirds of the island
, there is still empty land that remained the same without any buildings there.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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