deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment. what do you think can be done to solve this problem? support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In
this
modern scenario,erosion created by human movements for contributing new buildings across the globe with extremely bad consequences for the habitat.Although
,
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apply
this
phenomenon has a profound negative influence on the
human beings,there are Correct article usage
apply
also
some solutions to reduce the situation.this
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a more critical subjects
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more critical subjects
a more critical subject
such
as logging.This
is due to the Correct your spelling
overpopulation
over population
,so many individuals are participating in the cutting of Correct your spelling
overpopulation
trees
for inventing new buildings for both commercial and residential purposes.Another imperative reason for desertification is that nowadays,many people have become materialistic
minded due to more competition involved in the present generation,so the public is Change the adjective
materialistically
retailng
the wood which is generated by cutting Correct your spelling
retailing
trees
because they can earn revenue by doing business through logging.for instance
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movie characters who are involved in that film used to retail wood for money.
On another hand,there are some remedial measures can
be taken to lessen these difficulties.Correct pronoun usage
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Initially
,the public should be encouraged to acquire the importance of forests.Moreover
,there are some benefits of forests such
as having rainfall,reduce
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atmosphere
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the atmosphere
ensure
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ensuring
secondly
,the government put strict restrictions in terms of taking penalties from those people are
harming to forests.Correct pronoun usage
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for example
,according to the survey,Australia is very rich in maintaining the wildlife because Australia's government rules are very strict,so they are not used to remove
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removing
trees
.finally
,every citizen try
to plant Change the verb form
tries
atleast
one tree along the sides of the road.Correct your spelling
at least
Consequently
,our world will fill with more trees
in the future.for instance
,these days,some schools are organising a camp for planting plants,thus
in order to this
our world free from logging.
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