Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

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Dear Payal Hope you are doing well ! I received your letter

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week and I came to know that you are seeking some advice for booking your tickets for Canada . I am writing

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letter to inform you about a few websites for booking your flight ticket and hotel.

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with , Actually, My roommate is working with Veena Travels and she always informs me about her company's packages I found all the packages to be very attractive as compared to other websites . For more details, you can go through their website i.e. www.veenatravels.in.

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, I recommend

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website because you can get an additional 10% discount on your bookings because as I told you earlier my roommate is working with

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company and the company offers some discounts to internal employees.

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, She can use her coupon to book tickets as well.

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, I will advise you to compare your itinerary with Trip Advisor. So that you could make the difference in your tickets. Still, If you have any doubts, please reach out over the phone. Take care Regards P

preetiaug25Mon Jul 08 2024

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logical structure

To improve the logical structure, ensure that each paragraph introduces and fully develops one specific idea. This will help to guide the reader smoothly through your text.

suitable writing tone

Try to use a consistent tone throughout the letter, particularly paying attention to formal and informal language. In this case, it's good but could be slightly more conversational to match the context of writing to a friend.

greeting and closing

Your greeting and closing are well-structured, and this adds a friendly and polite touch to the letter which is appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.

complete response

You've successfully addressed all parts of the task: recommending websites, explaining why they are recommended, and providing additional useful ideas. This demonstrates strong task achievement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recommendation
usability
content quality
unique features
beneficial
educational platforms
productivity tools
travel guides
mobile apps
practices
current situation

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