some people think that scientists and technology experts are more valued than musicians and artists. what is your opinion?

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It is argued that, the importance of fields
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who do for a living and as a hobby.Some
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think science and technology are more valuable things over the
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and arts. I completely disagree with the statement and In my opinion,
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fields are very important and there are a plethora of advantages in
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fields.
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, Science and technology are one of the most valuable paths for
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who need to be experts and as far as I
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70% of humans choose
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field because it is a very fascinating field. Science is the key to the
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and
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who are experts in
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field do crazy things.
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sometimes they get success. They do a
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of things for the
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,
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as discovering new products, knowledge, new energies.They are more valuable persons in the
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because of their knowledge.
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, a
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of scientists seek new energies for our
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and a
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of them did that And within that, the present is very easier than the past,
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the future will be
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easier than the present.
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,
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and Art is the thing that heals their body and mind. The majority of mankind love to listen to
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because it is like a meditation programme like "Yoga". In my point of view,
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and art have the power to heal men's souls.
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, a
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of developed countries offer their
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a plethora of entertaining activities
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as Dramas, Musical Shows, because that humanity needs options to maintain their mental strength and
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a really important thing as a society. In conclusion,
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aspects are really important for our society for discovering our sources and maintaining our balance of mental strength.So there is no argument about who is more valuable because
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parties are important for our
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.
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