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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people say that studying the
English
language
 in an
English
 -speaking country is the best but it is not the only way to learn languages. I personally agree that studying in
native
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 speaking country
are
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 more beneficial to practice the international
languanges
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languages
language
 with the correct accent.
Moreover
, people could make some local native speakers as friends and learn some new vocabulary from the
daily-life
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.
English
 is the international
language
 that more than 60 countries over the world use
this
language
 as their official
language
. To communicate with other foreigners is really important to focus
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the meaning and the roots of languages. The
English
 skill can be improved by more practice and self -determination. It is relevant for the foreigner to go to
English
 speaking country and take some short-course and learn
English
 from native lecturers and staff could provide the foreign students with the authentic style. In some countries,
English
 is not the parental
language
 but
English
 subject was established in every fundamental learning program , from elementary school until the undergraduate programme in the universities.
Moreover
 , there are many platforms that learners could study
English
for example
 E-learning, speaking
video
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 or podcasts.
Nevertheless
, If non - speaking
English
 users do not practise it correctly and regularly the skill would not be developed. In case , they could not afford
studying
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aboard
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,
for example
; pre-sessional courses, they still have opportunities to study
in
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 the online platform. In conclusion, studying
English
 with native speakers, would provide
more
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 correct accent and show the method to use with proper pattern.
However
 , if there are some limitations in financial issues or living in remote areas,
a
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digital or online platforms would be
one
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of
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a good
option
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 for foreign users to learn at home.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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