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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter •Explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. •Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. •Give details of when you would be available for work.

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Dear Director, I hope that you are doing well. I am Harsh Desai and I discovered that you are looking for some volunteers to work at the museum. I am very excited to inform you that I am extremely interested in applying. The most important reason for me to participate is that I am always inclined towards helping others. By working there as a volunteer, I can contribute to the community where I grew up.
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, in the museum, I can learn a lot about history and meet new people every day. I think I am a perfect fit for
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 role since I have been in these kinds of activities many times. Me and my father go to church every Sunday morning to serve there as volunteers. From all those experiences, I have learned many things and acquired very useful skills that I can utilize to serve at the museum. I understand that you may need my availability to work. For that, since it is summer vacation, I am available for mostly all days in the evening time. If needed, I can manage to work in the morning as well from Tuesday to Friday from 8 a.m. to 1 p.m. I anticipate hearing from you soon with positive news. I really appreciate you for accepting my application. Yours Faithfully, Harsh Desai

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea that progresses logically from the previous paragraph. It should be easy for the reader to follow the structure of your letter.
task achievement
Expand on each point with more detailed explanations or examples. This helps to engage the reader and provide a deeper understanding of your qualities and how they relate to the volunteer work.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices throughout your letter to link ideas and paragraphs together smoothly, such as conjunctions, lexical chains, and referencing words.
task achievement
It is important to ensure the writing tone is appropriate throughout the letter. For example, maintain a formal tone, use polite requests, and avoid overly casual language in an application for a position, even if it's voluntary.
coherence cohesion
Your letter should have a clear and appropriate opening and closing. The greeting should address the recipient correctly, and the closing should include suitable sign-off lines.
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